well...
i have to agree with the post below me, it wasnt great at all. didnt really have a plot at all. you know something is wrong when the intro is longer than the story. Some dialog instead of writing would have been better too
well...
i have to agree with the post below me, it wasnt great at all. didnt really have a plot at all. you know something is wrong when the intro is longer than the story. Some dialog instead of writing would have been better too
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